OCA Documentary Student led Hangouts 18.2.21- 1.4.21
1.4.21
I was able to share my first draft with the group. I have written this up in my learning log but here is an extract:
I asked the group:
Should I give more context, perhaps in the title? but was told to keep the ambiguity.
Whether they could see my voice and what they thought my message was?
- Some did realise that I was taking a tongue in cheek position and that the visuals are opposed to the text.
- The fact that one peer asked me where I sat in the whole thing told me it wasn’t clear enough.
- Some thought the message was about spreading corona virus, holiday homes
- So I realised that my message wasn’t clear, nor was my voice.
- No one had realised that I had put the subjective Facebook comments on a grey background and facts on white background.
We discussed what I wanted to convey and how I could adjust to achieve this and to ensure the visuals come through. There were suggestions to:
- Reduce the text
- Separate the text in some places from the visuals
- Put the facebook comments on ticker tape under the images
- Present some facts without visuals on a text only page.
Afterwards I thought more about how to make it clear what my position is:
- I need to really think about where I am in the story.
- Let my voice speak in the visuals.
- Make sure the work is really tongue in cheek.
18.3.21
Much general discussion and sharing of resources, events, talks and books.
We also spent time discussing the pros of printing from lightroom and various paper that people prefer.
4.3.21
We spent a long time discussing printing. The useful part of this for me was that I will soon be changing my PC and getting a monitor. I made some useful notes on suggestions for good photographic monitors and have since researched. Currrently I have noted I should get a Eizo 24” at just over £500 recommended by Bob our resident group technical guru, though others are happy with their BenQ monitors.
Judy Bach joined us for the first time, she is close to the end of level 3.
I discussed my plans for my assignment 5 presentation, and asked the group if they thought I could use just 4 images appearing 4 to 5 times with varying text to show layers of truth. I can to the conclusion that I will need to use 4-5 images maybe for times to cover my themes which will give the required 15 images for the brief.
18.2.21
Many of our documentary group are now working on level 3. Much of our discussion this session was around level 3 work. This does give me some insight into level 3 which is approaching for me later this year.
We also gave peer feedback to Jonathan on his Documentary assignment 3.
Link to my OCA regional student meetings: https://nkssite5.photo.blog/category/learning-log-research-and-reflection/thames-valley-oca-meetings/
Link to my other Student led hangouts: https://nkssite5.photo.blog/category/learning-log-research-and-reflection/zoom-oca-meetings/oca-student-led/
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