Nicola South         Student number: 514516

REFLECTIONS ON FORMATIVE FEEDBACK

TUTOR REPORT: This was written feedback:

MY REFLECTIONS:

I was pleased with my feedback. My tutor was positive about my images, my solution to shooting in the lockdown situation, the concept, and the narrative technique.

I look forward to discussing with my tutor clarifying what he means about possibilities for “direct controlled observation” and “playful narrative peformances”.

Due to the circumstances this was in shot it would be a difficult assignment to reshoot and I don’t think the feedback suggests that I should do this. However I have actioned below my tutor’s suggestion to think about the form of the final work and how it might be delivered, especially in the light of the new learning I’ve taken onboard in the intervening period.

A physical representation would be good, in a gallery. I realise that exhibitions have to be adapted for the gallery space, so I would look for a gallery where I could set up a rectangular shape in the middle of the gallery.

With a rectangular central space, where the images are placed around the outside, and the viewers could walk around the outside of a house – as if they are viewing my house through windows, as in my work. This would give a good opportunity for activating viewers memories and responses.

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