Reflections on formative feedback
Tutor report: This was written feedback
My reflections
The feedback was positive and encouraging and helpfully incisive. My tutor’s feedback suggests that I consider presenting not only a face book/press statement and an opposing evidential image, but possibly juxtapose these images with opposing evidential images from the face book quotes. I can see that by doing so would extend the representation of various truths enabling viewers to face more of a challenge when interpreting the truth.
Most of all I am pleased that my tutor acknowledges that my voice and gaze are evident here, and also that my research is well integrated into my work, as I guess that this will help me when I start level 3 shortly.
Actions:
- My dilemma is how to achieve this as the original face book posts don’t contain any supporting images, this I find interesting in itself. So I will photograph opposing images myself, to add to the layers of truths represented in the work. The challenge will be firstly in collecting the material, and secondly integrating it into the slideshow effectively and without increasing it’s duration too much.
- I have confirmed that I will be ready to submit assignment 6 by 1.6.21
- I have also confirmed my intent to submit for November 2021.
Photography 2: Documentary 